In this exercise we find a landscape with an unbroken horizon, in which to take a sequence of images from right at the bottom to right to the top and asking ourselves if the shot works.
I went to a hill where it over looks a little village called “Newton Tony” and used this as my view for the horizon.
Image 1 here is with the horizon as low as I could take it without it looking like a waste of a shot because when looking through the viewfinder, if you took the horizon any lower you lost the buildings and were left with a row of trees and a lot of mist. If the skies were clearer then it would have worked by using some of the cloud formations to please the eye.
So now I look at this image and I feel that it does not work as the sky has let the image down, so we move the horizon up a bit to see if this helps the image in any way it can.
Image 2 the horizon is getting close to the middle of the frame and as you can all see the mist was not on my side on this day. If I could take this mist away I know that this shot would work quite nicely because it would almost be a balance between the sky and of the village below it. It was not until the postproduction of this image that I noticed that I have got the postman’s van in the shot, making me think that this could be an opening shot for a cartoon of postman Pat kids series.
But cracking on I moved the horizon up that little bit more to see how that would work and to whether I would like it or not.
Image 3 and I like it the horizon is pretty much central so the balance is good, I do feel tho that it could do with something in the lower right couner to break up the green grass a little.
Image 4 and it’s not bad it works well in the mist because as the sky has been reduced you find that you are looking more at the village as this is in the middle with a rolling hill, in the foreground there is the patches of tall meadow grass which does help a little in breaking up the plainness of the green grass.
Image 5 I find does not work as well as image 4 there is not much in the difference but it is enough to take it out balance, I think that if you are to take the horizon higher in the frame then you do need to have a very good foreground to have in view as I feel the foreground here has let the image down by being to plain and not having that something to give it that bit of balance it needs.
Image 6 and again I feel the quite plain foreground lets the image down I think that if there was a couple of sheep or something to one side it would work quite nicely.
When I was taking these images I was thinking whether they would work or not and I felt that they all would have worked really, there was the mist that let the sky view down and because the animals had been moved on from this field they would have helped when you got to like image 5 and 6. This is what I thought and I still feel that this is the case with these images now.